Thank you for this, cariad. Your words act to clear up the view I see when I come back to this from time to time. I will keep sticking to the surface, I think. Going deeper means dealing with the "ominous". Honestly, I am a bit scard to go there yet. Maybe ever.I would also use the word interesting. Both good interesting and bad. Good because I feel that although I have read your poem and understand it, I have only touched the surface. Bad because I fear that what lies deeper has a slightly ominous tone to it.
cariad
I do appreciate you responding to my question, TDS. I value your thoughts. I think it's a matter of keeping it well out of reach. Feels safer that way.Interesting good. It creates in me a sense that I need to know more, to get closer to this story to find out what is there, just out of reach.
Not the best of plans when trying to write, but as I mentioned above, it's a difficulty I am struggling to work through, so maybe one day...
Most sincerely-
tessa![]()