Rhabbi's Final Level One Assignment Assignment

[tessa]

I enjoyed reading this. Very little in the way of description, but I could imagine the scene easily, saw it played out in my head. Using dialogue in this way, as rose pointed out, really worked well in this story. Yes, it was an assignment, but still, thank you for sharing it.

[Mad Lews]

Very nice, an intensely personal scene that precedes the more public one. We are privileged to share their intense emotional interplay. A mere physical description would detract from your telling. You've created a scene that transcends such mundane matters.
Mad Lews