Rhabbi,

Sorry it has taken me a few days to get to this, I had some computer problems. I agree with H Dean, both that I did say you had potential and in his review of your story. I won't go over it again, as I think you know what needs to be done.

I really do feel you are a good writer and will be a great writer one day. I am happy to send you onto level 3, where I am sure you grow even more in your skills.

Thanks for all of the thought and effort you put into level 2 and the best of luck in level 3.

Aussiegirl