WOW, WOW. WOW!
What more can I say! That was great and I loved both of the twists. I know from experience how hard it is to make one twist work but two, well that takes real talent!
I fear you are reading to move onto level 3, which is our loss and their gain. Oh I love that proofreading recipe too.
Thanks for the enthusiasm you put into your assignments, it has been a whole lot of fun!
AG