Wow! What can I say? This story is a seduction, from beginning to end, drawing the reader ever closer.

I love the way you set the dynamic between the two women in the beginning. How one is submissive and the other takes on the matching role, leading her.

I was a bit confused about the bracelet, though. There is a message in there but I didn't get it.

The second part with andrew seemed like an awkward ad-on at first but later turned into the seduction I had gotten used to. Maybe you should work a bit on the transition between the parts.

All said, a great story!

Satan_Klaus