Thank you Blue Monday for neatly putting your finger on why my story is good, not just lacking in true Domness.

I'm ever so insecure about this story, because it lacks the total arrogance and certainty of the Dom figure that all other stories seem to have. But something inside wants me to write it as I'm doing.

And your comment just told me why. Yes! Not all natural Doms know what they're doing. Not all humiliated subs are reluctant forever, nor necessarily orgasm-addicted and desperate. Not all Doms are able to push all subs as far as they wish to be pushed. Writing and reading about imperfect kinky humans is fun too.

I think this was the extra push I needed to get part 12 moving again. Thanks again!

Links in sig point way to other parts.