I wish more people like you listened to the voices in their heads

This story is good, and it's getting better with every chapter. I can't wait for part 5. I do agree with ElectricBadger though, a bit more tension could have been interesting. Still, the idea of one slave helping you procure others, that's a good one.

Oh, and ElectricBadger? Take a pause from reading this and start writing more Diamondstar!