Request for Feedback

[Dragon's muse]

Basic rule of thumb ~~

The longer the work, the more details you will need.

The longer you are asking the reader to sustain disbelief, the more details they will need to do it.

[RiverOtter]

OK, since the story goes on for a while I went back and dropped in a few place names and references to events that affect the plot. I agree it's better to do so naturally, such as in the course of conversation.

Also, I started work on a new story in a Roman setting; I think this one has potential.

Thanks for the feedback.