Obnoxious Housemate 6 - Interlude

[Clevernick]

Believe me, Electric Badger, it's not uncompleted!

I've finished the story (13 chapters) with a proper 9-act structure ending a la David Siegel ( http://hs34.order-vault.net/~admin16.../nine_act.html ) and it's been cleaned up and turned into a manuscript.

It's 47000 words. Bdsmbooks dot com has asked me to revise it (they want less repetition and to "spice it up" some), and then they'd like to see it again, perhaps publish it. Perhaps not.

But in case they do, they're clear that they don't like to have more than a free intro published elsewhere for a lower price, so I have to stop posting more for now.

If it gets published, I'll point to that in my signature and let everyone know. If I give up on that, I'll start posting the parts again...

Thanks for all the great feedback! Anyone who really does want to read it over and give more feedback to me personally can ask me nicely, providing an email, and I can send them a copy -- that's not publishing.