Quote Originally Posted by moptop View Post
*Wanders off muttering to herself, "Damn! That was a really, really good point!" Wonders if she's overdoing the exclamation marks now...*
LOL

Really moptop, I like the story. But as you will learn under ruby's fine tutelage writing is about rewriting.

My assignment for ruby was a real struggle for me, and I share about that struggle here:

http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/forums/showthread.php?t=9676


Read the second post first and you will see what I started with, and after almost 300 revisions I came up with what is in the first post. It is hard, but worth it.