Quote Originally Posted by EB
...I'm a bit put off by a story that starts out with lots of people lounging in boredom -- it just doesn't inspire me to keep reading; but that's me.
Yea, well, yes and no. While I agree those bored folk might be a little uninteresting just lounging around, what about if say Salidia were, instead of ...'taking the opporunity to lounge back..." took the opportunity to have one of her big muscular slaves rub oil all over her naked body? Or, what if she chose to use one of them as a foot stool wihile another massaged her toes (for all those perverters out there with a foot fetish)? The possibilities for making it more interesting and erotic are endless.