Praise, Comments, or Suggestions for the New Lord Mobius's Dungeon

[Microwave0ven]

I roleplay on other sites, and one of them has this really detailed form that while you don't have to fill it all out, it provokes thought about your character, and that sorta thing. I'm sure it could be edited or changed to better fit the Dungeons.

Also, a link that sorta has interesting ideas for character-building: http://hollylisle.com/fm/Articles/wc2-2.html

Character Bio Form

Player Info

Name of Player:
Email Used:

Character Info

Name:

Sex:

Age:

Race:

Height:

Weight:

Voice:

Hair Color:

Eye Color:

Complexion:

Build:

Tattoos/Piercings/Scars/Birthmarks:

Sexual Preference:

Fantasy:

Strengths:

Weaknesses:

Odd Quirks (if applicable):

Personality:

Hobbies:

Skills:

Magic (if applicable):

Weapons (if applicable):

Occupation:

Background History:

And, here's my current character bio.. I might have to edit/change stuff later on as I get more ideas.

General
Name: Jaden
Gender: Male
Age: 22 (Oct. 11)
Race: Human
Orientation: bisexual
Collar: Gray - No sexual play with non-human/super human characters such as wizards, and aliens. Vampires and sexual play with both sexes is okay. No hard torture.

Appearance
Eyes: Green
Hair: Carroty-red, spikey
Build: Lean
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 155 lbs
Voice: tenor

Personality
Jaden is a shy sub with a good sense of humor. Sometimes he appears antisocial because he can't get over his shyness to talk to people, but once he gets to know someone, he would be more talkative. He is always open about his feelings and opinions unless he believes that saying it would hurt someone.

Goal
He is new to BDSM lifestyle and wants to live it out with a master/mistress who will teach him slowly, carefully, and gently, guiding him to discover more about himself.

History
Jaden discovered his submissive tendencies early on in life, as a kid playing with his friends at school, wanting to be the "slave" to the "indian chief", or wanting to be tied up with lariats like Houdini. As he grew older, he found it wasn't just a 'phase' that went away because he still was interested in bondage and the idea of slavery while most of his friends moved on to having a healthy interest in admiring girls.

In his senior year of high school, Jaden's parents passed away unexpectedly in a car crash while they were on vacation. He was left to the care of an aunt for the last year before he wasn't considered a minor anymore. His parents had been of the more conservative sect, and they believed that a person should make their own fortune in life. They left nothing to Jaden except for enough money to send him through college, and willed the remaining money to charity organizations.

Graduating from college with a degree in a computer-related field, he found work at a firm with one of his old friends from highschool. They often had to work together on projects and such, and became close friends - close enough that Jaden revealed some of his ideas to him. The other man remembered something he had heard about a dungeon, and mentioned it to Jaden. Jaden had tried going to a few bondage sessions with professional Dom/mes, but it never seemed to work out, because the Dom/mes just wanted his money.

He decided he would go all out and go to this dungeon that his friend had heard about. He sold all his posessions, and converted the money he had into platinum, which he brought with him.