Quote Originally Posted by Snark View Post
... As far as "thinking to ones'self"....My spouse certainly thinks out loud, which is quite disconcerting at times.
I'm sure it is, especially if she doesn't realise she doing it.

Well, that being the case, I believe it should read something like: Hole said to herself, thinking out allowed. Otherwise, it's a tautology, isn't it?

Yes, I look forward to future chapters.