No wonder you have this copyrighted.
I'm just starting out, and I was floored by what you did.
I'm not into incest and a little put off by it, but the quality of the writing just forced itself on me in spite of the subject.
And that you pulled the whole thing off in first person singular. Amazing. And moved the whole story along with just dialog.
In my book, that was professional writing. Well done professional writing.
You've got my admiration.
TG