What is your favorite story?

[hassim]

My favourite story is any of those written by Jill Bird.
She seems to place herself as the main character, a woman who is abducted and raped violently. Her abusers are always male, although not always human!
If you hate bestiality then she is not for you, but if you like to see an innocent woman punished horribly then look her up.

[alura]

....but if not, my all time favorite (though the video version of it sucked big time!) THE STORY OF "O".

[hassim]

"O" is such a wonderful classic! the beginning has one of the sexiest starts to a novel ever!
the story is very erotic, although a little tame by modern standards.

[pet10]

My favourite story is any of those written by Jill Bird.
She seems to place herself as the main character, a woman who is abducted and raped violently. Her abusers are always male, although not always human!
If you hate bestiality then she is not for you, but if you like to see an innocent woman punished horribly then look her up.

Hm..
Jill Bird is no my author. What he wrote I do not like it at all. I’m not interested in „m/f”. I prefer to read femdom stories e.g.:

Phemral: Slavery Conscription Story
Will Cane: The Prisoner

Jane Marwood:
The Governess
Peter at Sea
Punishment 2015
The Stepford Husbands

Rick's Story Page:
Border Town Reform School
Mary, Mary
The Kimberwillow Clinic
The Story of Jenny etc.

Lady Blade: The Mansion by

counterparts199: FutureDomme

Pluto: The Femina Empire

Factory boy:
Slavery 2020
Anything For Love etc.


There are femdom literature. They are vitty much scifi standing among the stories flight of inmagination.
I’ like the stories of dominant women. Deplorable a good femdom tale is in short supply.

["Roof"]

No question, Powerone. Your writing is excellent. I do enjoy Cortez as well: vivid descriptions and well-deleniated characters. His series of related stories piqued my interest in him; I rushed to read everything else he wrote.
Good stuffl

Yes, Powerone is definately good. My favorite type of stories are exclusively maledom bondage/severe discipline, forceably non-consentual. Say a well-curved coed or female office worker is too inhibited and stuck-up arrogant to deign to notice male erections aching to be released in her body. She's been scornful of even catching guys leering at her in the office or in the classroom. She's then savagely compelled to be the slut (better yet the pain-slut) she's hated the concept of. The training is harsh consisting chiefly of tit-torture (vise and voltage a nice way!!) and the result is she is her having to submit to any male whoever that wants her, the more publically humiliating for her (given her bitchy demeanor of late), the better. Say unexpectedly has to give a public blowjob or fuck, or subject herself to a cigarette being put out on her tit while she grits her teeth and lets him do it. The threat of more punishment if she even inadvertantly fails to satisfy the boy's or man's prick shoved at her, is real and creates a knot of fear in her as a spur to make very sure he gets all the pleasure he wants out of her.

[subterfuge]

I have to update my favorite story. I am attempting to write myself, and thought I was ready to submit something this week, but after finishing this last night, it hit me that my writing belongs in a comic book compared to this. I am honestly in awe of Kay's talent. I read something else the same day, by a highly rated writer on this site, one that I have enjoyed, and I realized something interesting, at least to me. Often when writers describe a scene, make an interesting analogy, of whatever, as creative as that may be, I find myself reading words, trying to turn them into images. In other words I can become conscious of the act of reading. With Kay's style, I'm totally engaged in the moment, often breathlessly hanging on every twist and turn as the action or mental processes unfold. I was actually weak when I finished this. My heart had been pounding for hours and it took 2 hours and 4 pills to settle down enough to sleep. But beyond all that, her imagination is equal to her technical skill as a writer. I had no idea submission could go this far and it still be the right thing for the sub. I was so involved in these characters that I found myself feeling deep empathy for them, especially Kara. And for me, this story has one of the best endings I have seen in this genre.
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OK, I'll stop now. Highly recommended!

sunburststrat

[the prussian]

I have many favorites both on and off this site. My interests lean toward F/m, scifi, mystery, hypno, magic... On this site Las Hembras : by DrDan is a very interesting and ironic tale, The Femina Empire : by Pluto strikes a chord within my submissive nature, and a recent arival Laura Croft and the The Venus Thigh Trap : by SensoryOverlord while not F/m is a story that i could not quit reading.

Favorites off this site are Ragedy Anne : by Thrall on mcstories, Better Living Through Chastity: The Story of Blair and Jackie : by slaventom at altarboy's chastity web site ( i wish that he would add a conclusion), and a story written for a yahoo group called A Womans World in which men have lost a war between the sexes (I do not recall the author but the group is Female World Order).

Along those lines I highly reccomend the ebook Fear of a Female Comsos : by Attis Robertson, in which the earth has once again been conquered by Female Supremast aliens.

Now after reading this thread i must go and check out Jane Marwood.

Sorry about the length,
daspreussische

[brace [EDQ]]

I would like to know your favorite piece(s) of writing on BDSM Library. There is a discussion about stories, that are not on this site, but those are hard to find or you have to buy them...
I would be really curious!

My top pick would be Adventures in Rubber by Bill Lemieux. I just LOVE his stuff!

Runner up would be Bound In Leather by J. Cross. While the story is on the site, the pictures are on a pay site.

Honorable mention is College Submission by Da'Rookie 22

- bracemaiden

[subterfuge]

Believe it or not there are a few of us who do believe in helping, or hindering in some cases, authors who post on the site. ... Feedback is one thing that most authors strive mightly to obtain, be it good or bad.

Actually what prompted me to respond to this thread is the baffling nature of reviews. My second concern is the appalling dearth of them, given an author's efforts in writing a piece. I have spoken of this before, as one of fav stories got only 7 reviews in four years!!! This was 7 reviews out of 49K reads! And it was a huge 38 chapter effort. It was, maybe not too surprisingly, the only story that writer ever submitted.

I read a story last night that got 17 reviews in 4 days! ... all 9's or 10's. And it was only one chapter to set the scene (to be continued)! And more baffling still, the plot had been done a thousand times (uh, let's see if we can blackmail a housewife into being a slut one more time - although I will freely admit that I LOVE a good slut-wife story!). I could see nothing so exceptional as to receive that number of enthusiastic reviews in so short a time. I will not reveal the story out of courtesy to the writer. This is NOT a criticism of his writing.

I should perhaps put this in perspective by saying that I'm a big fan of many writer's here - I am NOT a harsh critic, as these things go - if I like something, I like it, regardless of style or spelling/punctuation idiosyncrasies. My reviews tend to be enthusiastic and with admittedly quite a bit of rating inflation.

Back to the 17 reviews. To me at least this more or less confirms my long held theory that reviewers mimic the ratings of the reviews before them. Basically I think that high marks attract readers, who then leave high marks. I'm guilty myself of not even opening a story that gets less than 8. I mean, christ, ya gotta find some way to filter all the new stories. Lex, you were one of the lone dissenting reviews out of the 17, which in part is why I'm responding to your comments on the subjects of reviews. I couldn't have agreed more with your assessment.

Now to my own "need" for feedback as a fledgling author. I probably spent a year on and off writing my first two stories. My first got 3 reviews out of 8133 reads, and I got a few nice, although extremely short emails with some positive remarks, but not much that helped me answer some writing questions I had, or help determine the direction or approach of my new episodes using the same characters. I did appreciate those emails tremendously though. By the way, after the stories fell off the "front page" of new stories, the hits went down to nil, but that particular problem has been identified already. So, I have struggled with my motivation to finish and submit my current stories. Damn, I've got next to nothing to go on (except of course, my own erotic fantasies, which can be considerable at times).

I will finish this semi-rant with a huge thanks to you Lex. You were one of those few reviewers I had, and I was very impressed that you took the review process so seriously. I really appreciate your feedback. You are doing a public service to us writers by taking the time to give detailed reviews. Given your prolific writing, I am flat out amazed at the number of thoughtful reviews you submit.

regards,
sunburststrat

[MateTeaser]

I have only recently started reading stories here, but my favorite so far is "Susan's Return" by Switchman. A close runner up is "Casino" by Thundrshrk. I actually like them for different reasons. I found "Susan's Return" to be really well written with only a couple of misspellings and generally good sentence structure. I also liked the plot, although it is a bit tried-and-true - Boys get into trouble, boys escape (with a bit of help), boys turn the tables on their captors.

"Casino," on the other hand is filled with grammar/spelling problems, but the story pulls it through. I just love stories in which the bondage starts out consentual and ends up permanent to the suprise of the victims, although I could do without the extreme torture.

Interestingly, these two stories also illustrate what others have said about the dearth of reviews. "Susan's Return" has been viewed by about 10,000, and I am only 1 of 3 reviewers. "Casino" has been viewed by about 21,000 and has been reviewed by 10 readers (soon to be 11 when I add mine).

I am not sure what this says about the readership, but I hope that everyone will try to review more stories. Aside from helping the writers, the reviews can help newer readers like me.

[mystymason]

Dear sunburststrat:

Your comment accurately reflect my thoughts, right down to Lex’s great contributions to the site, the importance of direct email comments and, of course, the ratings and reviews. My first written effort, the ongoing Dexter Chronicles, actually does take a bit of time to put together, edit, proof read, set aside to percolate, and re-proof before putting it on the Library’s shelves. I’ve had over 45,000 hits and only five reviews (and I very much appreciate each of the reviews received, because they let me know what others think of my work). I also earnestly want to know how others would like the story to proceed (or if they would just like it to stop), if they want particular characters revisited, or a relationship further realized, and I love to hear the readers’ ideas, thoughts, musings, rants, etc., about any aspect of my work.

And so, I thank you for your very graciously expressing yourself.

Mysty

[subterfuge]

Dear sunburststrat:
My first written effort, the ongoing Dexter Chronicles, actually does take a bit of time to put together, edit, proof read, set aside to percolate, and re-proof before putting it on the Library’s shelves. I’ve had over 45,000 hits and only five reviews (and I very much appreciate each of the reviews received, because they let me know what others think of my work). I also earnestly want to know how others would like the story to proceed (or if they would just like it to stop), if they want particular characters revisited, or a relationship further realized, and I love to hear the readers’ ideas, thoughts, musings, rants, etc., about any aspect of my work.

And so, I thank you for your very graciously expressing yourself.

Mysty

Mysty,
I found the process to be incredibly time consuming myself. There seemed to be no end to editing. I just had to stop myself at some point. Every time I revisited them I found a better way to express something.

I also felt that more reader feedback would have helped determine future direction. I'm planning on putting Dr. Katrina through considerably more severe paces than in the first two light-weight episodes. Jeez ... hope I don't alienate that single very enthusiastic fan I have!

But getting to the mystery of the 17 reviews in four days. Someone got back to me about that. Seems some writers get all their friends to drop off reviews. That could explain all the one or two line reviews, and those 17 outstanding reviews were for a single chapter intro!?!

I do have another theory. Look at what's popular on TV. I have two shows that I think are done well: 24 and Shield. I have issues with both, but I think the production quality, the writing and the acting are all very good. But millions of Americans (and god knows how many others) fill there time with all the other shows. What I'm getting at, is that 17 people may have loved that one chapter. It is possible (I just don't believe it).

Hey, I just checked out your story for fun. At least you got five great reviews. That must be encouraging. And besides, your story got me hooked within three paragraphs. Your writing looks excellent so far. I'm going to continue with it. What a huge effort - 16 chapters!

regards,
sunburststrat

[slavish05]

Bobbi by 2nn is the one for me because I am so empressed about the way he or she write the storie at.
I hope other readers mean the same, when they have read "Bobbi".
Slavish05

[banshe27]

My favorite stories are the one when a girl discovers she likes sex and she like a little (or allot) pain to enhance organism. I like it when the sub is an active participant in the sense. Two of my favorite authors are Iphigenia and Alane Blake. Do any of you have and suggestion of these stories?
Thanks

[factory slave]

Hm..

Factory boy:
Slavery 2020
Anything For Love etc.


.

Very glad you like both my stories, pet10.

Slavery 2020 - the needs of the many outweigh those of the few will soon have a sinister return. Having finished his two year's conscription six months ago, university student John Richards is missing. Rebellious sister Marisa is convinced John has been kidnapped and thrown back into the slavery, possibly for life, which inflicted such 'pointless' cruelty onto her three brothers and father. These are dangerous times in 2025 Britain and Marisa's own freedom is on the line. After all, no one can beat our system.


I didn't much care about Anything For Love. I wrote it very quickly, and it needs a total rewrite to make it half-decent.

Thanks again to pet10 for doing what all writers, good or bad, need - reviews

[pet10]

It is a secret in the same way as Diaz's "excerpt" story

[pet10]

Yes Prussian, you are right! There is no accounting for tastes, but I think our taste’s similar and: „similis simile gaudet”! There is near Germany „Other World Kingdom” (in Bohemia) and moreover in Germany exists „Notre Damm” too. Maybe is it the first signs of feminism future? I have nothing against a Womens World. I like to read sci-fi f/m novel as you. (bis du tatsächlich Preuß?)

["Roof"]

Seeing this thread, I hope you don't mind me putting in my 'pennyworth'. The writers who contribute to the site have my admiration for their efforts and to single out any would seem unfair to those who are not mentioned.

However, I have really enjoyed the Jade Pavillion story and also the Inspector of Prisons, whilst the Story of Nicholle and Raider's Dungeon are also in this category.

On other published books, I was a great fan of the Victor Bruno books published in the UK by Olympia Press but sadly he is no longer with us. Ian Smith is an author that members might feel worthwhile exploring.

I, for one, like "High School To Hell: A Thanatos Tale". Would like to read more episodes of it. Cock-teasing bitches being painfully "re-tooled" as the sluts they should've been probably resonates with alot of guys, all of whom know some wench in their past who needed attitude adjustment of this kind.

["Roof"]

almost anything by llabmik!! any other fans out there? i'd love to discuss his works!

Yeah, llabmik does have alot of very good ones. Hope he does more.

["Roof"]

I liked:

"Babysitter Bound" by Thugee
"Cold" by...I forget
I can't remember the title of the last one, it's about a princess whose castle gets invaded and she gets raped and tortured, then gets rescued. It didn't turn me on at ALL, but it was quite disturbing. I did a review on it...

Too bad she was rescued! She should've spent the rest of her useful life as a fucktoy for any male whoever that wanted to use/humiliater her in public or private.

[subterfuge]

My first written effort, the ongoing Dexter Chronicles,

I want to go back to the original topic of this thread ... " What is your favorite story?"

Well everybody, do yourself a favor and check out Mysty's "Dexter Chronicles"!!! I know this is shop-worn phrase, but ... ohmygod!!!!!!!!

I had comfortably settled into a groove reading all the f/f stories I could find and occasionally finding a gem here and there. I also suffered through a lot of repetitious ideas, characters and plots, some weak writing, etc, etc.

Then Mysty responded to my post on reviews, so I checked out Dexter Chronicles, reluctantly at first, because f/m ... well I just wasn't interested in reading about men at all, whether m/f or f/m. But damn!!! This story not only blew my mind, but hooked me totally by the fourth chapter. Reading this, there are times I want to BE one of these hapless males, subjected to the cruel abuse of these damned sexy uber-women! Jesus! This stuff is intense, and creative, and wicked, and evil, and disturbing, and thought-provoking, and hot, and masterfully written and ...

Keep it up Mysty! Can NOT believe this is your first story. What a talent!
sunburststrat

[alura]

'The Story of O'

[Kaori-san]

On this site I have to say that 'Cheerleaders' Rape and Torture' by Semiater is my favourite one of the moment!

I loved 'The Ultimate Submission (Jacqueline's Story)' by Gato Medio and that is probably my favourite story over all. It was so interesting and the characters were so very real I would recomend it to anyone whose's not just looking for a quick bdsm sex story

[MasterRJ]

I liked the first few chapters of Cheerleader's Rape and Torture. It was just too long for me though. I also read one of his other stories and I just didn't like the ending. She started off a sweet little girl in the begining and at the end she's a full blown whore/sex slave. I enjoy degregation, but in the end I like to see the girl escape from it. Regain their lives. Don't ask me why.

[Kaori-san]

I liked the first few chapters of Cheerleader's Rape and Torture. It was just too long for me though. I also read one of his other stories and I just didn't like the ending. She started off a sweet little girl in the begining and at the end she's a full blown whore/sex slave. I enjoy degregation, but in the end I like to see the girl escape from it. Regain their lives. Don't ask me why.

Hmm.. I quite like a girl not to escape... but to accept it all -shrugs- dont ask why either.

[alura]

The "Sleeping Beauty" series by Anne Rice

[Kaori-san]

I love that story, Anne Rice has to be one of my favourite authors.

The Vampire books were absolutely breathtaking, she is an amazing descriptive writer.

Infact all her books are amazing, she's a wonderful writer.

[masostud]

I would like to know your favorite piece(s) of writing on BDSM Library. There is a discussion about stories, that are not on this site, but those are hard to find or you have to buy them...
I would be really curious!

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["Roof"]

Ah, I hope to one day see a story title of mine grace a post in one of these threads...

What story had you written? I'd put your "Neopadinski" name in the search feature and drew a blank. Where are your stories/website?

[kemosabe]

Anyone who has ever read a story that grabs you from the first sentence to the last should rank this as one of the best. Just about anything written by V.P. Viddler has to be in the top ten.