Hi Nick

Thanks for the peek at your work, I think its great.

lol.......and you really do use the "trust me" thing.........to funny

one comment.........I think you use the word "then" a bit much. for example


Then I realized I had a bit of a problem, and I thought about it for a minute before figuring it out

Then I came back to Sarah, sat beside her, and explained the following.

try it this way..........just use.......I

I realized.......
I came back to Sara

what do you think?????

thrall