Here be dragons.

[moptop]

Ooooh. Well. I've just read the rest.

Heh, yeah - saved the best bit till last.

Enjoyed it FAR too much to be able to come back with sensible comments yet!!

Thanks for the responses to my comments - on some of the comma questions, we shall see what others say. I do take your point (sometimes!), and maybe I just speak with more pauses along the way than you.

foreboding, though... I have to concede completely. I looked it up in the dictionary as well (wouldn't have dared to make such a statement without doing so first!), and didn't get past the first entry of it being a verb, taking an object. Yes, it is also a noun or an adjective. Oops.

On everything else where we might not agree - you are the author and thus the owner of this story: you fight back, girl, good on you! I have no doubt you will concede if others pick up the same points and are able to justify them to you; but only if they are well justified!

[cariad]

On everything else where we might not agree - you are the author and thus the owner of this story: you fight back, girl, good on you! I have no doubt you will concede if others pick up the same points and are able to justify them to you; but only if they are well justified!

Hey, didn't you know, I am a sub, say boo to me and roll onto my back with my legs in the air....