What comes next? A great question.

The early reviews are in and we've established that cariad, the sub on her back giggling, is indeed the owner of this tale.

cariad,

Please post the original assignment.
Also, please let me know if you want to make an editing refresh before I review your story.

I just love how the ladies (and sometimes the men) are jumping in and offering such great insight right away.

Note to all: I just picked up two huge assignments at work and am now booked solid through October. I'll pop in, give assignments and comments when I can. E-mail or PM if you feel like you've been waiting longer than you can stand or need some immediate writing aftercare from me!

Everyone, please keep up the great feedback,

Ruby