you cringe in disbelief.

for example but there was a story published to the libary I do not remember the title but one of the harlets was impaled on a pole so High that she could not get off without assistance.
It was used as a form of restrant.

Ok I am not a doctor or a gyno but I do know female physiology.
The pole would hit the ladys cirvex and she would be in horendus pain. This would not work.

or the master with a 14 inch cocks I am so tired of reading about 10,11,12,or what ever cocks with the girth the size of a wrist.

or woman with 44dd and a 16 inch waist.

hanging a sub by her thumbs.
A woman coming so offen that it changes her physcology.

Ok yes I know about poetic licence or the the fact it is fiction but come on, lets have a basis in reality.

before you start flaming me let me make this statement.

I am not picking on any one author I am just making a very unqualified opinion.
No I am not an author and I do not have the talent to be one.
But I do know what could pass for real and what is fantisy.

what do you think.