what do Y/you think?

[Alex Bragi]

Hi bug,

I really enjoyed your poems, thank you for sharing them with us. You’re very talented! The purple font on black is very goth, but I have to agree it's very hard on the eyes.

I read chapter one of your story also, you certainly have a great feel for domination/submission. Only, believe me, I’m no expert but I found the number of he, she, his, and hers too repetitive. To me, it kind of bogged down a good read. Well, you did ask.

Hey, great avatar too!

[bug]

thank Y/you A/all so very much for Y/your honest opinions and helpful advice *smiles* it is always nice to share feelings with A/another, especially feelings from such a very taboo subject. although i do not have very many BDSM poems and/or stories written i am still trying to find my expression through words. 6 months ago i would not have had this kind of passion or guts to write something so hidden. BDSM has opened a gateway of emotion that has been painful, beautiful and amazing in it's many ways that it has touched me.

i have always used S/switch typing as my Master had requested this the day i submitted to Him. it has always been treated as a form of respect in my opinion. i do apologize if it did side track the meaning of the words intended on the page as i had no intentions of doing this. i am still, sadly, not going to modify my typing methods as i think that it provides the reader with a deeper level of D/s relationships and portrays very accurate feelings. i do agree, however, think that it may serve as a diversion to T/those that are not accustom to these ways of writting.

i will be switching the font color on that one site, so that is does not seem so hard to read. *laffs* i, myself, thought that the color was a bit too dark but i had my doubts. i guess i have the answer to that question now *grinz*

Alex, i thought this too as i wrote it and it does strip away from the story a bit. it is a touch repetitive now that you mention it. i shall take aim tomorrow to remedy this matter. *nodnod*

thank Y/you A/all again for allowing me to share this part of me with Y/you

bug{Blade}

P.S. love the avatar, as my Master made it for me *giggles* thanx