Quote Originally Posted by pet10
Hm..

Factory boy:
Slavery 2020
Anything For Love etc.


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Very glad you like both my stories, pet10.

Slavery 2020 - the needs of the many outweigh those of the few will soon have a sinister return. Having finished his two year's conscription six months ago, university student John Richards is missing. Rebellious sister Marisa is convinced John has been kidnapped and thrown back into the slavery, possibly for life, which inflicted such 'pointless' cruelty onto her three brothers and father. These are dangerous times in 2025 Britain and Marisa's own freedom is on the line. After all, no one can beat our system.


I didn't much care about Anything For Love. I wrote it very quickly, and it needs a total rewrite to make it half-decent.

Thanks again to pet10 for doing what all writers, good or bad, need - reviews