My Current Story (BEWARE: Young, snuff, extreme and more)

[ghostsblood]

Did the story get finished and posted?

LOL.. not yet... the first 6 chapters are posted... but i havnt been able to hold to my promis... work has been killing me


Ill post here when the next chapter is up

[Domination King]

It's nice to see a description of a very brutal rape scene in such detail. I enjoy the metaphors and accuracy of anatomy. It's refreshing to see some creative word usage. Keep up the excellent literary work, and I hope to see more on the way.

Regards
D.K.

[ghostsblood]

Thanks for your kind words D.K.

Its probably obvious I am having alot of fun with the metaphors.

My particular favourite being:

, it is not long before the child is suffering amidst the throes of an asphyxiation seizure on stage; her abused body does the St Vitus pole-dance, while singing the chorus from Mr E’s favourite musical, ‘My throat couldn’t be more full of cock if I were being face fucked by an elephant’.

version 0.7 is due soon, I have been revising and re-revising more times than I care to count.. but eventually it will be posted. I will update this post when its done.

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