Quote Originally Posted by slave802120
With me, it depends a lot on the intended audience. If I'm writing for one that wants a stroke story, then I can cut all the detail.
Ah, but what exactly defines a stroke story? Isn't detail all that matters, especially in humilation story AND especially stroke story.

Without details: She waited. He came in, fucked her (or whatever), came, went out and lit a cigar.
Great stroke story, isn't it?

Now as to what details ...