Quote Originally Posted by pejanon
I thought you were apprehensive of being moved to Romance department?

Well it looks more like a setting for a bloody tsunami. It certainly should get better when it gets to individual characters - it's always better when you do it to Someone, not to a bunch of guards.

Now this Lien Venrihet (the fifth!) he isn't ancestor of Machaveli, is he?

I always though that "now look what have you done!" is one of the best lines ever!

Ok. Here's nice albeit 'slippery when wet' stage. Now what?
Well as I see it developing Lien is just a delightful cad and the real story is about the revenge worked upon him by his third wife. ( Volunteers?) It would seem that after spending a few years terrorizing his subjects he became cognoscente of the pressing need for an heir. His first wife produced a girl who was promptly disposed of and the wife spent her first anniversary being very slowly garroted with her own intestines. (Lien really had a thing for nice warm slimy guts) The second wife failed to produce any offspring ( probably due to Lien’s infatuation with her cute little ass) and so he was truely sadened when he had to slowly roast her over glowing coals a year and a day after thier wedding. The third and final queen did manage to deceive Lien, bear a child, and present Lien with a heir. Lien never lived long enough to discover his "son" was in fact fathered by his queens executed lover and born by a young scullary maid... but enough of this I can’t give away the whole story. Let’s just say Lien follows in the footsteps of his dear dad though a little sooner than he expected, The grieving Queen and future King live happily ever after and the peasants rejoice. God I love a happy ending. honest

Now you've got to promise not to tell anyone, it's just between us how it going to work out OK
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