being the nice person I am I decided to read atleast one of paladins stories befor posting. while I cant fault him for his misspellings ( I make plenty of those myself) I have to agree that the righting style isnt the best I have read. I also think that as bunk said slowing down as he typed them would help I came across several sentince fragments in the first paragraph alone and gave up when it didnt capture my attention in the first three paragaphs. when dealing in the short story format this is a must. the story line itself ( from what i saw) how ever seemed sound.