Mad Lews - firstly, thanks for taking the time to read the story. About the 'rest' of the story... I often write little shorts like this for openings to other stories, but never get around to writing the rest of the story.
I end up using them for openings to email-type roleplays, usually. If someone wants to roleplay with me, the rest of the story might happen...or if my imagination works something out. :P and yes, I'll see about more contributions in this thread in the future!
Ranai - *stands mouth agape in shock* there, suprised enough for you? hehehe :P glad you're enjoying it though!