The erotic story's to Dickens or Van gouh makes me cringe.

These are storys that we read to put a little spice in our meager live's

The purpus of this thread is to slow down some of the clich's that I find in every single story that I read. And sad to say I read about 90% of each update. (sorry dont like the F/m or M/m.
Cant get my head into it.)

Lets slow down the 14" cocks or the massivly tortured woman having mind altering orgasams.
Or where woman are abused horendusly and get turned on.
and "she is betrade by her body"

yes a true real bdsm story would probly be boring but I could use a little less poetic licence.

Please do not be affended I do not claim to be a writer I do not have the talent for it and I apploud you all for your skill.