Quote Originally Posted by Microwave0ven
nopenope, i don't even know how the rest goes... mind gets a writer's blockage when it gets past that bit. any help to finish the story would be nice
Hi Mic O,
Nice opening, you drop us off with a surprising show of strength. So what have we gotten into with this fair young maiden in red? Definitely dangerous, maybe malevolent, but what's the source of her strength. ( if you say she has the strength of ten because her heart is pure I'm out of here).
Seriously any idea as to what you've created? First thoughts are a Vamp, which could lead to a little poetic justice for your thief. Ruby could offer more helpful ideas if you wanted to go in that direction.
I'd have to mull over other possibilities but I'd be interested in a little more enlightenment. Can you give us a little more insight? What's she like? Is she angry at the thief's feeble attempt? Does she feel contempt, or is she amused maybe, and perhaps willing to play with her prey for a bit before ....
Yours truly,
Mad Lews