Quote Originally Posted by daddiebear50
The doorbell rang. He checked the clock, and put down his book. He looked thru the peephole. Late 30sr, buxom, but a lovely face, contorted with worry, and maybe a little fright. He left her standing there for 5 minutes, enjoying her furtive glances around, and silent pleading for the door to open. To her credit, she stayed still, and didn’t re-ring the bell.
Nice opening

Quote Originally Posted by daddiebear50

She picked up the first document. I was the contract. She read it over slowly. The first part covered her agreeing to the training as a sexual submissive; the payment for training, and her purchasing agreement.
Now that's the way to mix business with pleasure, and if I understand you this could turn out to be pretty profitable. Better than your average investment, I definitely need to add this one to my 401K;


Quote Originally Posted by daddiebear50
"Yes Sir.........I Jane.........."
Nice short, can we look forward to hearing more about Jane's adventures in the BDSM Story library maybe?
Take care and keep writing
Mad Lews