Quote Originally Posted by daddiebear50
That was the idea, but my writing has stalled. (because it takes twice as long to edit, as write, due to poor grammer and typeing skills) Have several stories started, but too busy reading, and playing in the academy. Maybe I'll have to get back to the old grind stone.
I was browsing this thread last night and printed your short take. This is not something I usually do. I couldn't sleep until I read it the second time.

The vision of "I, Jane" bent over signing the contract while the trainer was at the other end checking her punctuation was priceless. Mmm, erotic visuals. I want to "see" more of the story.

The other elements you added were cool, too, like the tidbits about training the neighbor's girlfriend, etc. When's that story coming out?

C'mon...do the girl a favor and finish the goddam story. :Poke:

Nikita