The Orgainizational Series by Slave Ruthie

[slave ruthie]

i was really, REALLY struggling with chapter 7 of 'Harvest Of Tears' - i simply couldn't emotionally relate to the female Dominant, Rosario. i realize i was writing Her as a theatrical, over-the-top 'Pantomime Domme' who sought others' approval rather than living on Her terms! it was hopeless and my Beloved Master wasn't much use either (please forgive me, Master!), saying "It will be different for women - find a Domme and ask Her opinion''. so i did via this forum, and i'm VERY glad that Mistress Ranai kindly came forward to offer Her advice

Mistress Ranai has re-crafted Rosario into such a formidable, credible Domme that i would readily kneel before Her, if i wasn't already owned in real life LOL!

i wanted to record my gratitude, in particular to Mistress Ranai, and to all the O/other people who have taken the trouble to review and contact me with ideas and advice. Y/you have no idea how valuable this help can be to a novice writer!

please keep telling the A/authors on this site what Y/you like and dislike, what works and what needs to be changed. it's not about praise (although that's very nice to receive) but about learning and sharing O/our love of BDSM

[Nikita]

i was really, REALLY struggling with chapter 7 of 'Harvest Of Tears' - i simply couldn't emotionally relate to the female Dominant, Rosario. i realize i was writing Her as a theatrical, over-the-top 'Pantomime Domme' who sought others' approval rather than living on Her terms! it was hopeless and my Beloved Master wasn't much use either (please forgive me, Master!), saying "It will be different for women - find a Domme and ask Her opinion''. so i did via this forum, and i'm VERY glad that Mistress Ranai kindly came forward to offer Her advice

Nik the Writ Deejay is playing Sunshine of Your Love by Cream in the background....

Personally Ruthie, I give you a lot of credit for sticking with the chapter until you were satisfied with the result. Will you give us a heads up when you submit it for posting? I'll make time for it on my dance card.


And Mistress Ranai, I have another thing to thank you for. I'm sure it will not be the last time, either.

Nikita

[slave ruthie]

"Will you give us a heads up when you submit it for posting?"

i submitted it and a slightly amended chapter 6 today, nikita

[pejanon]

so now we have to wait?

aww grrrrr...
Ok some say patience is a virtue - and am neither



to you slave ruthie

(me wait....)


Pej

[slave ruthie]

so now we have to wait?

aww grrrrr...
Ok some say patience is a virtue - and am neither



to you slave ruthie

(me wait....)


Pej

if A/anyone wants an advanced copy as a .txt or .doc or .pdf, write to me at ruthiesb69@yahoo.com

[Ranai]

You’re welcome, it’s been great fun to be allowed to take a look and offer suggestions. Especially to an author who creates suspense and takes her readers through emotional turmoil like you do.

[slave ruthie]

dear Mistress Ranai

O/our chapter has been added but doesn't appear yet in the list of updates - its here at http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/c...hapterid=15894

i hope people like Rosario - i think She's wonderful!