In The Dark

[FurryFury]

Hi FF,


(I think you still have time to clear up redundant posts)


I see you've switched from fast action 'take no prisoners, no one gets out live" approach to more leisury in-depth story telling.

I like that - I also liked "hard to soft" switch ("I will help you my dear". "Clean...my...feet" "angel ...sinning").

What I did not like - being left dangling! Auction please!


Pej

Thanks Pej!

I cleaned up that redundant post which I didn't know I had made. Thanks for pointing it out!

Yes, I am now not just relating individual stroke fantasies of mine but actually telling a story. I started this one thinking I would be writing the auction but as happens with stories sometimes, it veered in another direction.

I enjoyed thinking about the mind fuck. Oh! What a nice lady! She said she's helping me...to well damn, she's one of them. I enjoyed also the eroding of my character's will with very little physical force.

The result being that I ended up wanting to stay with her, the woman who had been somewhat kind to me and yet tricked and betrayed me.

I love that my body keeps betraying my too.

The other result being that I am ready for the auction baring any other unforseen twists and turns.

However I wonder how well this story would be accepted in the story threads here now. There isn't that much sex for at least 20,000 words. I think most would get pissed off about that and bored.

I will try to work on The Auction Room today or tonight.

Thanks again!

Fury