The Auction

[Ruby]

Lovely, indeed.

Fury, your tales are delightful. Thank you for sharing them.

[FurryFury]

Thanks Ruby!

I'm glad you liked this story. I was very unsure about this one.

Fury

[JohnZ]

Thanks Ruby!

I'm glad you liked this story. I was very unsure about this one.

Fury

Nothing to feel unsure about - it is lovely -- Looking to read even more!

John

[submissivewife]

FuryFury

I like this. Taking your time to build for the taking of her virginity. Can't wait to see how he has her "fall in love".

subwife

[FurryFury]

Thanks JohnZ!

I LOVE your art. The truth is now that these are no longer just my stroke fantasies but becoming more like real stories I find myself wanting to pull back the "I walked into the room," parts and make it, "She walked into the room," parts. I'm not sure why. I also don't think this one flowed as smoothly as The Captured Stuck Up, In the Dark or the more pure stroke fantasies Fi Fi The Fuck Poodle and The Daddy Room. Each one seems a bit harder to write and seem to have more mind fucking and less physical fucking though that has to change soon.

Fury

Thanks SubmissiveWife,

I am not sure what he will do to make her fall in love. Personally I'd rather have someone treat me well the first time I got fucked than let those animals take me but he should do things. I just have to figure out what.

*L*

Fury

[submissivewife]

Fury

Thanks SubmissiveWife,

I am not sure what he will do to make her fall in love. Personally I'd rather have someone treat me well the first time I got fucked than let those animals take me but he should do things. I just have to figure out what.

*L*

Fury

Well, lets think...What gets any young female teenager? He treats her kindly, he showers her with gifts, he shows lots of attention. He plays her emotions against her so she is reliant on him. Of course it's not that love will be the issue with him. He just wants to fuck a virgin. She is very vulnerable right now and any show of "special" attention will get her more entrapted to his charm and sway her.

Just a thought if you were having writer block. I had lots of that when I wrote Sir's Visit....That story was actually a timed assignment by my Sir. He gave me 42 hours to do it. Most of it was written during the last three hours. Once you get your ideas flowing you will do great...as usual.

subwife

[strapmeup]

That was great...I really enjoyed reading it...thanks!