Hmm, I guess I need to do something so the forum does not truncate the hyperlinks. They can be found by searching my author name, or just Bad End


Yes, the sense of hopelessness was what I was aiming for. I play a lot of Japanese hentai games. The majority feature many different paths the story can take, with numerous 'Bad Endings' mixed among the good.

Vonnegut's second tip is going to be difficult to follow. One new chapter that I have finished writing (but not editing) focuses on the agressor's POV. She ends up on top, so that might be satisfying in the way the other ones are. However, that breaks what defines the rule.