Unfinished stories

[Dododecapod]

I must admit to being in two minds when I review a story. I'm keenly aware that I have no work on display here; the person I am reviewing has at least been published that far, which is more than I.
But at the same time, how can I be less than honest about what I see? I have a strong knowledge of the English language, and a love of the literary. So, I speak my mind.
I am occasionally harsh. I am occasionally brutal. But I am always attempting to give good advice, and I am always honest.

[Rabbit1]

I must admit to being in two minds when I review a story. I'm keenly aware that I have no work on display here; the person I am reviewing has at least been published that far, which is more than I.
But at the same time, how can I be less than honest about what I see? I have a strong knowledge of the English language, and a love of the literary. So, I speak my mind.
I am occasionally harsh. I am occasionally brutal. But I am always attempting to give good advice, and I am always honest.

just a few things I have to say on that note--one is not evey writer's first lanuage is english ---and second of all this is sex stories mostly peoples fantasies not a literary library. so you can be brutal if you want ---but hey lets lighten up some are just begining to write---if you are too brutal then it may be the last they write. If you expect perfect Literary stuff you might want to check out some pay sites---yes I think authors should use spell check---and even a proof reader---but get real with your brutal Literary comments---and use them on a Literary site where the Pros get paid for their work.