Well done Playfulsub, you have made such a huge change to the feeling of the chapter!

I love the background work you added, it not only gave me more of an idea of how the house was run, it let me find out so much more about May.

There is also very little for me to nitpick -

milord - I think this might need a capital, but I am not entirely sure. It is a title though, so I would go with a capital.

girls hole - this should be girl's hole

You are now ready to move up a level! I will let Ruby know you will be heading her way!

Thank you so much for putting so much thought and effort into your assignments. You have done really well and I am sure you will only continue to improve in the upper levels.

Take care
AG