You're a star. If I'm to whine about something it would be the line "So I may still see". It didn't really fit. It's a bit too informative rather than talking to my heart. You have an amazing talent for this. It can't be stressed enough.
lol.........
So I may still see.........
it means the i want to still see and feel the world.......all that i love....once i am gone........
I want the stars to burn brightly enough to.......follow me......