Subwife,

Your story is very well told and I wonder if it happened. The words seem to flow as if you were experiencing the episode all over again. If it did not happen, you are a heck of a writer and must have pulled pieces of it from prior scenes. Excellent. I'm looking forward to reading the next episode. :

Perhaps a little more description of your Sir, or as much as you want to divulge, so we can see him as the dominant that he is.