Poor muse! I apologize for touching on a phobia...that was definitely NOT my intent. This is one of the most brutal stories I've ever pumped out. I have no idea what caused it. The funny thing is, although I wrote it, it does not in the slightest bit turn me on either...LOL
I will read through your criticism and reply with a modified version. Thank you for looking through it even though the content bothered you. I will at least refrain from using fire again...promise.