See the attached document
got your ---is possive and should have been you're
the word night -lite---should have been night-light
the word "goooood" should have been good ----
"bullseye should have been bulls-eye
No way you can ---is a negitive and a positive mix--you can't or you can not ---
matress is misspelled
All in all the house ---should have been the entire house
And as long as their parents could remember.--is a fragmented sentence
these errors were caught by Spell and grammar check on MS Word--it is a useful writers tool ---it does not catch them all but 99% of them will be caught






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