Razor's Fourth Level Three Assignment

[Nikita]

I liked the story. I liked the way it was told. It reminded me of the Mike Hammer series created by Mickey Spillane, though you have a ways to go.

Just a nit. Below is an illustration of a slight change in wording to consider when you edit.

At first glance, the Francesca case seemed the same, but it would spiral out of control, ending with the total and utter downfall of Misses Loretta Francesca.

At first glance, the case of Mrs. Loretta Francesca seemed the same, but it would spiral out of control, ending with her total and utter downfall.

Please continue. I think you are on to something here.