Razor's Fourth Level Three Assignment

[Nikita]

I'm having trouble balancing description with succinctness. All of the reviews for my stories on the Library side say "I wish it had more description." I don't know how much credence I should give the reviewers, since I'm aiming to improve my writing skills beyond erotica, which normally is physical description heavy.

Razor,

Erotica is not the only type of writing where you need to draw on adjectives, similes, and metaphors to paint a verbal picture. In my opinion, go for the descriptions. They make your story rich. The balance with succinctness comes with editing.

Nikita