What's the hook and how soon?

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This may seem pretty obvious, but is getting right to the act itself the hook of a good story? How soon should the sex commence?
I am trying to write a story for the site, but I've been struggling a little bit. I've been caught up in description and back story, which I know can be tedious. So I suppose that I'm just wondering how long you'll read without a money shot taking place?

Hi delish

OK........

What i like to see in a story is character development......****acement......the ability to describe a scene. Characters that have....well....character.

The "hook" in a story..........is the story. Not just one part

If it takes 10 chapters to build good tension....then the rest will follow. Something as small as the electric shock of an accidental touch.......is erotic.

Write what you like and enjoy....write a story that pleases you. If your story is making you happy......that is all that really matters.