Euryleia's 2nd Level Two Assignment

[Euryleia]

Thanks Euryleia. I would have made very similar changes myself, if I was to rewrite the story. I certainly would break it into more paragraphs ( I honestly did not know when I wrote this story, anything about a new paragraph for a new speaker! lol).

I aslo understand the desire to alter words into US spelling!

Thanks for a great job. If you need any help with assignment 3, please PM me.

Sure, thing. I'll take a look at the assignment today and see what I can get to you.

[Aussiegirl1]

Sure, thing. I'll take a look at the assignment today and see what I can get to you.

Lovely, I would really love to see what you can do, so I hope you can have some fun with this one.