Thank you for reading this story and yoor comments,Nikita.I built that twist in the end for several reasons.Firstly,the one I wrote this one for loves little OMG twists.Secondly,it built a natural ramp for more chapters in this story.Thirdly it created compelling questions for her,such as why just one voice is heard on the phone which extends to why do the others remain silent?Are these men some she knows and they are afraid she will know their respective voices.Not knowing who these masked ones are,are they able to watch her during the day without her knowledge,indeed is she being watched by them?When will they strike again and where.?At the beginning of a long weekend perhaps?
Being the fine writer you are Nikita,you can see there is indeed a rich vein of material here to work with for further chapters.
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I like this story Taz, hot, edgy, and has a twist at the end.