Okay, this is a little messed up. I tried to write this story in the first person present tense because the story itself seemed to beg for it to be written that way, but there was a lot of reference to things that happened in a certain time frame, some of which was in the past, and I don't think I managed to keep my tenses straight. I reckon I'll need an assignment of some sort to work out that writing flaw of mine. Either that, or a good editor.

I really wanted to go back and edit it again, but then I just got overwhelmed with trying to figure out where I thought I had gone wrong and to correct everything from that point forward.

It definitely reads a bit strange to me now. Am I being oversensitive, or do I have a real problem here?