Quote Originally Posted by underwhere View Post
Okay, this is a little messed up. I tried to write this story in the first person present tense because the story itself seemed to beg for it to be written that way, but there was a lot of reference to things that happened in a certain time frame, some of which was in the past, and I don't think I managed to keep my tenses straight. I reckon I'll need an assignment of some sort to work out that writing flaw of mine. Either that, or a good editor.

I really wanted to go back and edit it again, but then I just got overwhelmed with trying to figure out where I thought I had gone wrong and to correct everything from that point forward.

It definitely reads a bit strange to me now. Am I being oversensitive, or do I have a real problem here?
Looks like we were typing at the same time. It reads strangely. You aren't oversensitive, but it is good you picked up on it as quickly as you did.