First of all, Rose, life comes first. I'm sure I'm not the only person who appreciates you volunteering to help out with this, and I, unlike the domme in this story, am a patient waiter, and I hope I am a good student.

Secondly, H Dean, yeah, I discovered just how difficult it was to write from this perspective. I don't know if I'll try this again or not with a different assignment later. Of course, you're also correct that the perspective itself lends itself to an excessive quantity of "I"s, and that, too, will be something I need to figure out how to address to make for more variety in my writing. The scenario seemed to lend itself to this particular perspective, but I'm not sure I'm all that happy with it from a techniques/mechanics standpoint. When Rose gets around to it, I'll be eager to see what tips I might be able to pick up. I'm always open to constructive suggestions for improvement.