Hi underwhere,

I am going to address the "I" thing Dean mention by using one of your paragraphs as an example.

Ten minutes away from my house, I pull into the parking lot of the local supermarket. I head for the entrance and take my cell phone with me just in case. Perusing the fruit section, I finally see the cranberries. Walking over to them, I notice something peculiar: the cranberries are not in paper bags. They are in plastic bags, the kind with netting. I grab them anyway, and went a few aisles over and grab some paper bags. I know I'll use them for my brown bag lunches eventually.

Ten minutes away from my house, I pull into the parking lot of the local supermarket and head for the entrance with my cellphone in hand, just in case.

While perusing the fruit section for the cranberries, I spotted them in plastic netting bags, not paper. I grab them anyway and went a few aisles over to get some paper bags. They will be used for bag lunches eventually.

That's all I could go through now. Hope it helps.