Quote Originally Posted by Ranai
You’re welcome. And by all means critique away! Constructive criticism is a good thing. Many people post their stories because they are looking for feedback, on content and on form. Whether any of it is actually taken up or not - that's always Author's Prerogative.

And if you give an author suggestions of things you believe might be improved, it tells him or her that you found the story interesting enough to think about it.
Ranai luv
Yes,Yes I know I owe you a Fem Dom story with a boy toy in chains....
I'm just cleaning up a backlog of ideas. Perhaps that's my problem of late writing from ideas and not senses. In any event I'll get to it fairly soon.
Honest
Mad Lews